Posted 17 October 2012 - 04:59 AM
I largely agree with all of his points. He's not advocating a conversational style in which flowery language abfuscates the message. He's advocating clarity and readability. There are far, far too many papers out there where you read them and initially think, "what on earth are they on about?", and have to re-read at least once more.
Point 1 on focus is spot on. There are many reasons for this but it would aid matters if people stated where they were coming from and what they attempted to achieve, not just what work they did and the conclusions they drew.
As I say, I agree with this paper. He's not advocating that papers are necessarily lighthearted, conversational pieces that are riven with jokes. It's all about clarity. A clearly set out paper that describes its purpose, the work that was done, the conclusions drawn and, where suitable speculation on future work/ideas, does it's job far better than the standard borefest that is unclear on any of that. The point, after all of papers isn't really career advancement within a field but to convey scientific work and ideas and as such clarity should be king.
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